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Action Force: Rebranded

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Won't be up for long. Just a brief look at the project I'm working on at home for personal use - rebranding some Joe comics as AF, but also in some cases rewriting dialogue. Here is a 23 page comic cut down to 6 (just the Flint bits). In the Joe comic he is bereaving over Jaye and the first panel is actually a satellite smashing into Boston. In this version it's a bomb in Berlin. And whilst Stalker talks Flint out of shooting the Cobra guy, here it's played out as a bluff with Stalker reinforcing it...

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Re: Action Force: Rebranded

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Nicely done!

I'm only seeing six pages, though.

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excellent, the colours look painted, good job
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Baron - Sorry , six.

Bill - I've only redone the words and added the logo, but it is the best looking Joe comic I've ever seen!

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Malcolm Orr wrote:Baron - Sorry , six.

Bill - I've only redone the words and added the logo, but it is the best looking Joe comic I've ever seen!

cool, whats the original comic?
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GI Joe Reloaded issue 0 I think.

Here's two examples - in both these stories 'Flint' was originally Duke...

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i see you've fallen victim to Hollywood Abroad Syndrome.

yellow US Taxi cab in Germany..?

other wise, good job.

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Sundance wrote:i see you've fallen victim to Hollywood Abroad Syndrome.

yellow US Taxi cab in Germany..?

other wise, good job.
LOL! Yeah, and the Fed Ex van. I might 'shop them

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well, i know FedEx operates in the UK, so it's not entirely inconcievable they'd be in Germany.

you just need to shop out the cab's sign, then it's just a yellow car...

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Sundance wrote:well, i know FedEx operates in the UK, so it's not entirely inconcievable they'd be in Germany.

you just need to shop out the cab's sign, then it's just a yellow car...
Great idea!!

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