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Your name is Bartholomew

Posted: 30 Apr 2010 21:14
by DAMartin
Following Eddie's advice, I increased the panels' sizes

Re: Your name is Bartholomew

Posted: 30 Apr 2010 21:21
by DAMartin
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Re: Your name is Bartholomew

Posted: 30 Apr 2010 21:25
by DAMartin
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Re: Your name is Bartholomew

Posted: 30 Apr 2010 22:02
by The Kraken Wakes
more!

Re: Your name is Bartholomew

Posted: 30 Apr 2010 23:04
by gung-hoeddie
Looks good DA, I agree with the Kraken more please.

Re: Your name is Bartholomew

Posted: 30 Apr 2010 23:06
by The Kraken Wakes
the comic book look definately works better with wider shots. how about adding a few close ups of faces in some panels?

Re: Your name is Bartholomew

Posted: 01 May 2010 09:53
by gung-hoeddie
yes, the more you practise and refine the art it'll soon become second nature.