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Showdown at San Rivera Part 2

Posted: 13 Nov 2009 09:30
by Red Laser
Part 2

Several weeks have gone by Rivera has got his city up and running the locals fickle in allegiance now seem to not care about the regime change those that do.....disappear. Agent Seizure is still making his reports as yet his cover is intact. But there has been outcry outside of San Rivera especially with Rodriguez body paraded through the streets in a wheelbarrow then being hung up for all to see. And the Black Major as yet has not moved in as he promised during the coup.

UN Headquarters, New York

The tall dark haired man in military dress uniform knocked on the Minister's office door, after awhile he entered and Said "Sir, My men and I are ready to move in on San Rivera as soon as the order is given". The Minister a squat, dour looking man in his early fifties said "There is no need for that I have my another team of specialists ready". The other man interjected, "Sir, not GI Joe? I mean surely they won't be picked?" The Minister just looked up and said "That will be all! Oh, and Buckingham close the door behind you!". Buckingham tried not to look exasperated, stood up straight and replied "As you wish Sir!". Once out of the office Buckingham could not help but feel pushed out but he was already making plans.

San Rivera

Rivera had his feet up on his desk reclining back in the big leather armchair while smoking a Cuban. At his feet was Rodriguez daughter scantily clad with a collar and chain attached round her shapely neck Rivera just patted her head remembering how he always wanted Michelle. He was a little diappointed and nervous about not hearing from the Black Major who just seemed to disappear, he pressed a button on his intercom and said "Nuno,has there been any sign of the Major and his men?" He waited a few seconds and was answered back with a "No, General". He shrugged, unzipped his pants and motioned Michelle to pleasure him while he had hold of the chain securing her.

On the outskirts of San Rivera Black Major had been gathering a large contingent of men and vehicles enough to take over twelve San Riveras if need be. He spoke into his radio "Laser, has the special package arrived yet? Over!" Red Laser still in his concealed observation post said "Hai! Danshaku is here and waiting. Over!" Danshaku or the Baron smiled under his helmet his eyes burning with an inner fire as Laser's contingent all shouted Blood! Blood for the Baron!
A few hours later both contingents met up and converged as one there were many Shadow Traks and Hyenas all fully loaded for war. The Major and the Baron were in a red gunship bristling with missiles and a chainguns while Red Laser Katana drawn was standing up in a Hyena's gun mount with his Exterminator hitched to the back.

To be continued.......

Re: Showdown at San Rivera Part 2

Posted: 13 Nov 2009 14:07
by DAMartin
So :baron: is deploying the big guns now

Re: Showdown at San Rivera Part 2

Posted: 13 Nov 2009 14:31
by SteveD
Rivera is just a baaaaaad man. He's going to get his! Send in the :shadow: :shadow: :shadow: :shadow: :shadow: :shadow: 's!!!!

Re: Showdown at San Rivera Part 2

Posted: 13 Nov 2009 14:37
by Red Laser
They are coming Steve and so are you amongst others. ;-) There are more twists and turns in the plot yet to come. I am thinking up more things to add while working.

Re: Showdown at San Rivera Part 2

Posted: 13 Nov 2009 14:40
by SteveD
Am I to be the equivelant of a "Red Shirt"? Bet I run on, only for Ross to snipe me from afar, or Baron to shoot me for insubordination after about 5 seconds! :-D

Re: Showdown at San Rivera Part 2

Posted: 13 Nov 2009 14:48
by Red Laser
You will be all on the same team but Ross I split into 2 different characters. I am not sure where the Cobra involvement is going yet though as I may decide to do a second story that follows on. My inspiration is the Black Hawk Down incident in Mogadishu, thrillers that have intrigue in them and the Sierra Gordo story by Larry Hama in Marvel's Joe titles.

Re: Showdown at San Rivera Part 2

Posted: 13 Nov 2009 19:15
by Red Laser
...... continued

The Baron's force headed straight for the main plaza guns fully locked and loaded. The Baron en route to the Villa was in a briefing with the Major about his new laser riflemen and events so far in San Rivera. At Naja Hanna Agent Seizure nearly fell out of his chair when he saw the Shadows driving passed his store, he scrambled for his radio making sure the store was first locked and bolted. Seizure then said "This is Agent Seizure reporting, Over! Do you read me command? Over!" In seconds his Command responded he then relayed what he was seeing they replied "Do not do anything out of character, remain calm and carry on reporting, All hail Cobra!"

In the meanwhile the Baron had landed at the Villa as Rivera had done recently and was met by Nuno, Rivera's aide. Nuno stammered "What is the meaning of this, who are you?" The Major just sneered and pistol whipped Nuno and spat out "Insolent cur! take us to Rivera now!!!" Nuno stumbled up and dusted himself down, he bowed spitting some blood out a few guards came rushing out with guns unholstered. Nuno waved them away but ordered them to lead the way to Rivera.

Rivera was sat at his desk looking through papers,files and requisitions when suddenly the doors were thrown open. In walked the familiar form of the Major and a man he didn't know in a cylindrical helmet and white chevron jumpsuit, beside them was the bleeding Nuno. Michelle hid behind Rivera who got up and shouted "What is the meaning of this? You don't come bursting into MY office unannounced like this!!" The Baron just shot out "It's MY office now; you men take Rivera and his pet to his new office!" The once loyal guards gripped Rivera disarming him and dragged Michelle up and escorted them away. The Baron strolled over to the balcony looking out at everything he now had.

UN Headquarters, New York

The Minister sat behind his large oak desk he was debriefing his team leader Ed Inman on the situation in San Rivera. Inman a stout brown haired man had a no nonsense approach to missions given him but socially knew how to mess around with his lads. When the briefing had been finished he flew back to his team base to brief the others. Opey was a new recruit of Ed's and was being shown round the base he was to be quartered with Miller a studious American who in his spare time was working on an E-comic.

The Unit's Base
Opey was of medium build with short hair and had a moustache he sat down on his bunk in the shared quarters. Miller was cursing his laptop for the seventh time; Opey looked over curiously and asked "What's up Mate?" Miller responded "Every time I go to load my comic I get a government warning flash up!" Opey then asked Miller what it was about Miller responded "I'm doing a military comic about a unit like ours called Action Force but these warning flashes up!" Opey replied "I think you better stop then I am damn sure I have heard of an actual unit called that maybe you should stop?"
Down the hallway Dream Theater could be heard blasting away in the quarters of Marshall who looked like a mad professor, he was air guitaring with a wastepaper bin on his head shouting out "I am the Baron!, Obey me!" Next door to him was "D-Day" Dawson who was banging on the wall shouting obscenities at Marshall. D-Day was so called because he bragged about a relative of his who was immortalised in a war comic.
Across the way from Dawson was Mat and Ross they were both advanced spotters for the unit. Mat was of medium build but stocky was interested in lizards he kept a pet Komodo he called Kraken which he was feeding flies and Ross of the same build had a hobby collecting and customising models.

Suddenly, a klaxon went off summoning everyone to the Debriefing Room Inman was stood on a podium in front of a blackboard on it was a layout of San Rivera. Inman wanted his team divided into four cells he called chalks one, two, three and four each Chalk would be bolstered by UN sanctioned troops, air support and humvees. They would meet up in Argentina and then stock and fuel in Chile. The briefing was soon over and Opey being the green recruit was briefed on what equipment he needed and they boarded the Hercules transport planes.

End of Part 2

Re: Showdown at San Rivera Part 2

Posted: 13 Nov 2009 20:38
by The Kraken Wakes
Love it Ironblood!

So, Ed knows how to mess around with his lads? :.

Re: Showdown at San Rivera Part 2

Posted: 13 Nov 2009 20:55
by Red Laser
Cheers Krakers!! :lol: Not in that way!

Re: Showdown at San Rivera Part 2

Posted: 13 Nov 2009 22:24
by Ross SC
i actually have a dual personality in real like! it's a fight between good & bad, much like this!