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The fake Commander (A.K.A. my worst dio ever)

Posted: 14 Jun 2009 21:35
by DAMartin
As the title says. This is my worst Dio-story ever. It was supposed to have a background starting from the third scene. I forgot it, and the story remained without a background.
Why am I posting it then? Because it is already done. There will be more mistakes because of a lack of resources.

:cobracommander: decides to take a swim. He leaves his Battle Armor aside, beginning with the backpack (don't worry; he has another costume under the armor).

Re: The fake Commander (A.K.A. my worst dio ever)

Posted: 14 Jun 2009 21:43
by DAMartin
While :cobracommander: is absent, somebody else takes his armor on.
Fake Commander: Nobody could tell I'm not Cobra Commander...

(my first mistake: I used the EXACT SAME FIGURE! How can anybody know he's not the same character from the previous scene, with a different backpack?)

Re: The fake Commander (A.K.A. my worst dio ever)

Posted: 14 Jun 2009 21:46
by DAMartin
The fake Commander, with help of Dr Mindbender and Raptor, makes some :cobra: members believe he's the real deal.

(second mistake: the aforementioned background lack)

Re: The fake Commander (A.K.A. my worst dio ever)

Posted: 14 Jun 2009 22:18
by DAMartin
:cobracommander: discovers what has happened and assembles a team of :cobra: s who were not tricked by the fake Commander: :destro: , :baroness: , :storm: , :firefly: , :zartan: and Snowcat (who WAS tricked by the fake Commander, but the real :cobracommander: tricked him to the contrary). :jackal: has also come by :destro: 's request.

Re: The fake Commander (A.K.A. my worst dio ever)

Posted: 14 Jun 2009 22:44
by DAMartin
:destro: also calls some Iron Grenadiers, while Mindbender builds some BATs.
It's time to :cobra: (and a :enemy: ) versus :cobra: action!

Re: The fake Commander (A.K.A. my worst dio ever)

Posted: 14 Jun 2009 23:00
by DAMartin
Battle of the generics!
Mindbender built the BATs in a hurry, so they were not rivals to the highly trained Iron Grenadiers.

Re: The fake Commander (A.K.A. my worst dio ever)

Posted: 14 Jun 2009 23:32
by DAMartin
Ironically, Mindbender himself is defeated by an android; his buggy couldn't stand Snowcat's Hyper-Powered missiles.
Snowcat: I won! YODELYODEELYODEEEL HI HO!

Re: The fake Commander (A.K.A. my worst dio ever)

Posted: 14 Jun 2009 23:58
by DAMartin
:zartan: disguises himself as the only thing that could scare Croc Master... a manta ray! Croc Master cowers in fear.

(third mistake: I know that the backpack :zartan: is wearing is more like a cobra rather than a manta ray, but I didn't find any manta ray costume to put in :zartan: . I also forgot to put Depth Charge's tail behind :zartan: to give him a more manta ray-like disguise)

Re: The fake Commander (A.K.A. my worst dio ever)

Posted: 15 Jun 2009 00:06
by DAMartin
:storm: ties Slice's toes, defeating him without hurting him.

:storm: : I won't harm Slice. He is also a loyal Cobra member. He is just being tricked.

Re: The fake Commander (A.K.A. my worst dio ever)

Posted: 15 Jun 2009 00:14
by DAMartin
:firefly: and :copper: move so fast that they look blurry ;-) . They shoot at each other, while jumping like John Woo characters. This ends when :firefly: throws a bomb to :copper: .

(the explosion was too fast to be photographied. Fourth miistake: the poor excuse to a blurry image that just shows both characters standing. At least, they're pointing each other)