Your name is Bartholomew
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DAMartin
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Your name is Bartholomew
Following Eddie's advice, I increased the panels' sizes
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"You were engineered with such potential, Serpentor. But you lack the most important DNA of all... mine."-
DAMartin
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Re: Your name is Bartholomew
"You were engineered with such potential, Serpentor. But you lack the most important DNA of all... mine."-
DAMartin
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Re: Your name is Bartholomew
"You were engineered with such potential, Serpentor. But you lack the most important DNA of all... mine."-
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Re: Your name is Bartholomew
more!
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gung-hoeddie
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Re: Your name is Bartholomew
Looks good DA, I agree with the Kraken more please.
CIA got you pushing to many pencils.
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The Kraken Wakes
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Re: Your name is Bartholomew
the comic book look definately works better with wider shots. how about adding a few close ups of faces in some panels?
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gung-hoeddie
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Re: Your name is Bartholomew
yes, the more you practise and refine the art it'll soon become second nature.
CIA got you pushing to many pencils.