New Action Force Story - Operation Sneak

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Ok, this is a brand new start of a story (but mixing & matching others) - (hence the one page!) but i would be interested in feedback from everyone. First thing to say is that i am no computer whizz and this has been done on a copy and paste basis!

http://picasaweb.google.com/joncrook19/ ... ationSneak

Have a look, i know the writing is small so its best viewed as a slideshow or larger, but it's a start. As i said any feedback would be great, not even sure if it is legal so apologies if not and i'll remove it asap!

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well it looks cool but its so small I cant see it or read it!

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Ok, slight technical problem there, way too small!

I have changed the layout, try this page:

http://picasaweb.google.com/joncrook19/ ... ationSneak

Best way to view is to open a slideshow and flick through!

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Looking cool! If you want to e-mail your finished pages I'll make you a thumbnail gallery in the Customs > Miscellaneous section.

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Johnnyred, I congratulate you on your first efforts!

It's an ambitous task, but I'm sure with time you could create something really interesting!

I've had a kind-of-related-idea that I've yet to actually do along similar lines.

I thought that seeing that Jammer, Gaucho, Blades and a few others never had data files published for them in the comic back in the day that I would search through the archives and cut paste up some Data Files for them using apropriate pics from the comics.

Just haven't had the time yet, and my knowledge of the comics [despite lovingly reading them every week as a kid] is pretty scratchy at best.

Has anyone else had a go at creating the 'missing' Data Files here in the past at all?

:doc: :doc: :doc:
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Yeah, I'm actually planning to do the exact same thing. I also want to do the Skeletron and Green Major.

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paul wrote:-

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I thought that seeing that Jammer, Guacho, Blades and a few others never had data files published for them in the comic back in the day that I would search through the archives and cut paste up some Data Files for them using apropriate pics from the comics.

Just haven't had the time yet, and my knowledge of the comics [despite lovingly reading them every week as a kid] is pretty scratchy at best.

Has anyone else had a go at creating the 'missing' Data Files here in the past at all?

:doc: :doc: :doc:

Actually the Baron has talked about doing vintage style data files for them for a volume III collected edition !!!

Im also working on a new style of data file for these very characters at this very moment ( literally at this moment as I have several things open on the research Im doing on Mexican Armies) to be printed in the actual printed edition of RED DAWN Issue one which will hopefully only be about $3 US Dollars it will be of course NON PROFIT so whatever we sell it for, it will be at cost

stay tuned

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heheehe posting at the same time as the Baron

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Yeah, I'm actually planning to do the exact same thing. I also want to do the Skeletron and Green Major.


Great Stuff!

I look forward to seeing them in Volume 3!

:doc: :doc: :doc:
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Cheers guys, I think your'e right paul, it might take longer than i originally thought!

Iv'e got the story but it just a case of finding the correct pics!

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